Morgan
Is this the second “chapter”? Again, I love the graphics. The “up close” “I’m ready for my close-ups”…. Only real editorial comment is there seems to be a disconnect between style of graphics and the language used in the sound bubbles. It’s as if the text is too formal for the story-line and the graphics. These panels don’t give me the feeling that I’m “there”. Does that make sense? Like written dialogue versus overhearing a conversation.
Thanks for the kind words with regard to the art! I really appreciate that. With regard to the writing style, not sure how to answer that, other than hopefully you keep reading. In any event, I appreciate you taking the time to read the story in the first place. Thanks again!
takes me back to my days of comic books. Teenage Superheros, Superman, The Green Lantern, etc. I am now in possession of the comics. Here in my Anchorage condo. I’m getting ready to re-catalogue the mass (4 huge plastic containers) and compare to what I read here.
Morgan
Is this the second “chapter”? Again, I love the graphics. The “up close” “I’m ready for my close-ups”…. Only real editorial comment is there seems to be a disconnect between style of graphics and the language used in the sound bubbles. It’s as if the text is too formal for the story-line and the graphics. These panels don’t give me the feeling that I’m “there”. Does that make sense? Like written dialogue versus overhearing a conversation.
Thanks for the kind words with regard to the art! I really appreciate that. With regard to the writing style, not sure how to answer that, other than hopefully you keep reading. In any event, I appreciate you taking the time to read the story in the first place. Thanks again!
takes me back to my days of comic books. Teenage Superheros, Superman, The Green Lantern, etc. I am now in possession of the comics. Here in my Anchorage condo. I’m getting ready to re-catalogue the mass (4 huge plastic containers) and compare to what I read here.
Nice! Nothing like being reunited with your old friends and adventures!